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About Me Official Beta Tester General Poet austinco20/Male/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 2 Years
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Strength

Lord of the sky,
it's set in stone.

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We Danced Upon The Breeze
by =morbidthegrim

1st critique ever, so bear with me. The colors of the sky make a wonderful contrast to the brown at the bottom of the picture, it gives...

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Notes

Fri Jul 3, 2009, 10:15 PM
Ben
yeah, there are parts where it loses its flow and others where it feels incomplete

Austin
indeed
going back and reading what i write shows me how vague i really am
hah

Ben
yeah, vague would be a mild word for your writing

Austin
whats a less mild word?

Ben
shrouded

Austin
esplain

Ben
you write a lot of intense emotion, but it's usually without any hint of what emotion it even is. the reader can just tell that some emotion is there

Austin
so the emotion needs an anchor though right?

Ben
not really an anchor...it needs an opening. the emotion needs to be readable, as you read your poetry, you should be able to pick out the emotion you were feeling when you wrote it

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  • Listening to: Doomsday Clock - Smashing Pumpkins
  • Reading: Robert Frost
  • Watching: The Girl Next Door
  • Eating: a Superdog
  • Drinking: npthing

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  • Current Residence: TX
  • Interests: basketball, computers, school
  • Favourite movie: Donnie Darko
  • Favourite band or musician: Smashing Pumpkins, Mozart, Chevelle
  • Favourite genre of music: Alternative
  • Favourite artist: Leonardo Da Vinci
  • Favourite poet or writer: Edgar Allen Poe - The Raven
  • Favourite photographer: Gilad - on Devart
  • Favourite style of art: uniqe styles with a solid base
  • Operating System: XP/Vista
  • MP3 player of choice: iPod, all I got
  • Shell of choice: blue (gets 'em all) :P mariokart
  • Wallpaper of choice: something from genzoman - devart
  • Favourite game: My life
  • Favourite gaming platform: The Earth
  • Favourite cartoon character: Jerry the mouse
  • Personal Quote: Veni Vidi Vici
  • Tools of the Trade: Brain, braun and a business suit

Comments


:icontatehemlock:
*tatehemlock Aug 23, 2009, 7:21:19 PM
Thank you so much for the recent faves! Cheers! :)

Tate

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=shaake-gfx Jul 14, 2009, 3:37:06 AM
thanx for the :+fav:

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*billyunderscorebwa Jul 3, 2009, 10:18:34 PM
:wave:
Thanks a bunch for your support! I really appreciate it :highfive:
:peace: Evan

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~mrigell Apr 9, 2009, 7:37:11 AM
Thanks for adding me to your deviantwatch!
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~amazonrain Apr 7, 2009, 8:43:50 PM
hey thx for the fav

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=austinco Apr 7, 2009, 10:50:44 PM
sure :) it was a neat concept

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"In mathematics you don't understand things. You just get used to them." - Johann von Neumann
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~amazonrain Apr 5, 2009, 1:35:48 AM
Thx soo much for the fav but I would relly appreciate a comment

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call me razz.

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=morbidthegrim Mar 30, 2009, 9:51:34 AM
Thank you for the watch, its appreciated :)
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~JaymeLorayne Mar 20, 2009, 5:41:02 AM
thank you for the fave! I wasn't even going to keep that deviation. I did it for a contest and was planing to delete it after :)

Maybe now, Ill keep it..

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=austinco Mar 20, 2009, 9:07:05 AM
well, it was good :)

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"In mathematics you don't understand things. You just get used to them." - Johann von Neumann
The size of your heart is matched only by the size of your fist.
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